The Ultimate Choice of What I Wanted to Do for the Next Thirty Years of My Life
Also, I think that I have always wanted to have a profession in
which I can help others. I used to want to be a pharmacist but as the years
passed, I found myself a passion for the human brain. Unfortunately, being a
pharmacist would not have allowed me to work with the human brain each day, so I
decided that being a psychologist would be a good fit for me. On top of that,
my boyfriend’s mother is a psychologist and she said I had all the qualities
required to be one.
Actually, those facts are only a part of the story because choosing my future profession was way more complicated than that. Yes, I have always loved
gossip and understanding the brain. And yes, boyfriend’s mother told me I would
make a good psychologist, but the truth is my choice to go in psychology was
way harder than that. Actually, I was in a program where I did not feel like
myself and I wanted to make a change. I started looking at different programs
and psychology caught my attention. I thought psychology was a great fit for me
considering all the other facts I just enumerated so I decided to take a leap and go
with it. As of right now I would say it was one of my greatest decisions
because I find it way more interesting, and I really see myself being a
psychologist. I guess we will see in ten years if I made it!
- Your favorite blogger, Béatrice
Wow that sounds like a very interesting profession, I am thrilled to learn more about it!
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SupprimerYour story on how you discovered you wanted to be a psychologist is so interesting ! I agree that the human brain is so interesting ! It is fun to hear about someone who wants to get in the same programme as me !
RépondreSupprimerMaybe we will be in the same classes in university!
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RépondreSupprimerWhat an excellent blog post, Béatrice! I love your story on how you came about to discover that you wanted to become a psychologist. Life is far from being that straight linear path we set in our head.
RépondreSupprimerI really see you exercising this profession! I'm eager to read your other blog posts. ;)
Here are a few elements to improve:
- Break your text down into paragraphs
- Verb tense - pushed
- Word choice (do) - to do a profession
- A few commas missing (i.e.: Unfortunately, being a pharmacist would not have allowed me to work with the human brain each day so I decided that being a psychologist would be a good fit for me.)
- Try to avoid using ... unless you are purposely omitting part of a quote.
- Word order/ word form - my profession choice
- word choice (said) - all the other facts I just said (you might want to use something like 'enumerated'
Hey Béatrice! This was a fascinating story of how you chose the field of psychology. Furthermore, I do think that liking gossip and people will make you a talented psychologist. Continue putting in your efforts I believe in you!
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